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Love Is

by ~LyraAlluse

Love Is


Love is an illusion...
...Like a field of broken dreams...

Love is a dream...
...Like a wish upon a star...

Love is a Star...
...Like a chest of sparking diamonds...

Love is a diamond...
...Like a cave of hidden treasure...

Love is a treasure...
...Like the wreckage of the ocean...

Love is an Ocean...
...Like the castles of the shore...

Love is the shore...
...Like a ship tied up at harbor...

Love is a harbor...
...Like a boat away from home...

Love is a home...
...Like a haven for life's travelers...

Love is a traveler...
...Like the winds of rugged canyons...

Love is a canyon...
...Like the mazes of my soul...

Love is...

...Like...

...The hope I wish to find...

...But...

...Will only be reveled...

...in time.
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This is a little poem about love that I came up with. I hope that you enjoy it! Comments are always welcomed and appreciated.
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This is a very nice poem! I like the ellipse, it's a good effect and adds to the mood! :thumbsup:

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~LyraAlluse Jan 8, 2008  Professional General Artist
Thank you very much! I am happy and honored that you like it. And also thank you very much for the favorite!

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You are very welcome! :hug:

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I find myself writing of love a lot..and I think this is great..well done..and I like the ocean like theme as well..I don't know it that was your intention, but love is like a beacon of light on a distant shore..we all find our selves drifting at sea hoping to reach that shore... :)
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~LyraAlluse Mar 7, 2007  Professional General Artist
Thank you so much! ^_^ I am honored that you like my poem. ^_^ I'll have to check out some of your love poems too. ^_^

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:iconevil-francesca:
:cries: You know, I forget that I really do like poetry. And this was really nice. The subject of love is very hard to take seriously unless you are a romantic person, but you did very well with this, I liked it a lot.
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~LyraAlluse Oct 2, 2006  Professional General Artist
Awww, I'm glad that you liked the poem, Frannie-Chan. *big hugs* I was kind of afraid that it was too cheesy because I...well...suck when it comes to reltaionships. 0_0 lol But I am honored that you enjoyed it. ^_^

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:iconevil-francesca:
Do you really believe that the people who understand the most about love are the ones that have a "good" relationship? -_- I think the best people who can really define it are the ones that have either expirienced it and lost it, or who keep looking for it in their heart.
Now THAT was cheesy.
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~LyraAlluse Oct 2, 2006  Professional General Artist
I agree completely. ^_^ If life was perfect, we'd all be living in a Disney movie...and quite frankly...I'd be annoyed. 0_0 LOL The bad times have to come in order to appreciate the good ones, so I always try to look on the bright side through the dark hours of my life. (Given it doesn't always work, but I AM human. 0_0 lol)

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~Cell285 Sep 26, 2006  Hobbyist Photographer
Poetry isn't really my pot of tea, but nice job none the less. :)
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